Thursday, 16 May 2013

FMP - Final Crit

It was nice to see where everyone was at and how far everyone had come. It was also a point where i realised how much work i had actually done and there wasn't much need for panic.


Feedback received:

10 Things - Check spelling
Colour is too subtle
Stronger visuals needed for children
Watercolour type more effective

Be-Ro
Propose advert / motion graphics
Focus on design for screen

Regional Dialect
Possibly create poster

I appreciated the feedback given, given the time some things I wpn't physically have time to change, other notes are irrelevant  - 10 things - products inside packaging were missed - these are aimed at children, alongside stronger visuals. The watercolour type has been used across entirety of packaging.

Regional Dialect - I have created posters



Notes made on boards:




Final Resolutions presented:




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